Sample Alert!

           OK so I got a sample for interested readers who would like to read my story. I hope you like it I tried to make it my best! Enjoy!

              “Give it back!!!!” a stern voice said. ‘What did I have?’ I wondered. I looked at my hands and found that I was holding a golden magnifying glass. “Give it back!” it said once again. I looked around and there was no one to be seen so I picked up the glass to see if that would help. Never before had I seen a lady so hideous with threatening and piercing red eyes, long stingy fingers, and a body old and wrinkled. She seemed weak yet strong. Powerful for an old lady. “Go away!!!” I yelled. “Oh Melody Angelus, I believe you know that I won’t leave until I get it back!!!” The lady said. “Give what back?” I yelled, “How do you know my name?” I instantly fell to the ground and very keen pain came afterword.