Sample Alert!

           OK so I got a sample for interested readers who would like to read my story. I hope you like it I tried to make it my best! Enjoy!

              “Give it back!!!!” a stern voice said. ‘What did I have?’ I wondered. I looked at my hands and found that I was holding a golden magnifying glass. “Give it back!” it said once again. I looked around and there was no one to be seen so I picked up the glass to see if that would help. Never before had I seen a lady so hideous with threatening and piercing red eyes, long stingy fingers, and a body old and wrinkled. She seemed weak yet strong. Powerful for an old lady. “Go away!!!” I yelled. “Oh Melody Angelus, I believe you know that I won’t leave until I get it back!!!” The lady said. “Give what back?” I yelled, “How do you know my name?” I instantly fell to the ground and very keen pain came afterword.

Sorry!

      OK sorry I haven't been exactly continuing my story for a while but here is what is up. I actually have a new idea in my head about another story with different characters. I am very positive and passionate about the idea I chose so I will probably finish this book and bind it at FedEx or something. Anyway the story involves angels and demons. The demons have been up to trouble since the world began the only people stopping them have been the Angels of Light. Well the demons apparently found a way to disguise themselves so they remain hidden and cause the trouble unknown. The only way for anyone to see them is by looking through a golden monocle although one will receive the gift of being able to see with out the monocle. Will they find the monocle in time? Or will one realize their powers before its too late....

Part 4

     My first thought was " What the heck dude? Are you INSANE?!!!" but I kept my face halcyon and calmly replied, "OK, where is the catch? You know April fools day already came and went. Your a little too late." "Sorry Irene, I am afraid what I speak of is the truth. I take this efficacious job seriously if I lie I get fired." Ryan said fixing up his hair. "If you are telling the truth you might as well explain in a little more eloquent detail?" I asked very annoyed. 
     He sighed. There was something odd about him that I couldn't quit put a pin on. " You know something I don't?" I asked. "Well there are alot of things you don't know so you can't quit ask that yet" he chuckled.  "Well whats going on? I'm confused" I replied.  "Before I tell you anything there is a story of your heritage. It may be a little confusing. There are many nationalities very different from yours that true in blood you guys are related." He said " Well basically there was a family known as the Rang. There were 6 children born to this family too there names were Carol,Victoria,Sierra,John, Chance, and  Jason.One day they decided to take a brief visit near by lake but apparently a lady had already poisoned the water with a substance that gave any living creature or man a special power that matched their personalities. People still don't know where she lives or whent" "So whats to it? What happened to the witch?" I asked. "Let me finish my story! And she wasn't a WITCH!!!!!!!!So, where was I? Oh! So unaware what was ahead of them the innocent youth stepped in the pond. Through the cracks of their skin on the feet the liquid was able to seep through their skin and into their fragile blood.
     Playing in the water the children started to posses the powers. Carol noticed that she everything she desired she got the second she wished for it. By this she knew she had the power to imagine. John noticed that the river was steaming and when he got out he was burning with a blazing heat, he had the power of fire.  While one side of the river steamed the other was frozen and apparently Sierra was one the other side so she had ice. Chance noticed that he was a little more protective of his family more that before he realized a little shield over his head no one was a lowed inside but the people he wanted, he had protection.  While discovering their new powers the siblings noticed one member missing. Some how Victoria managed to escape from her siblings and find an animal to eat and suck, she had Vampire." " Wow! You mean I am related to a vampire?!!" I yelled "that's so cool!" " Please Irene, BE QUIET!!!!!!!! So anyway Jason was left alone hurt, and ignored when all of a sudden Chance started crying. He apologized and said sorry. Relief is what he wished for. Sierra and John mixed their powers to give him water. Water was what he wished for and by this he knew he had Mind Telepathy and Convincing." 

Part 3

   Everything was happening at a fleeting pace. I was terror-stricken and didn't know what to do. The wisest decision I could think of in this point in time was to just continue listening to the strange man. "Yeah...let me check...WOW! She is!...purple...OK...bye.." and with that he hung up his phone with a finishing beep. I wondered what he was so stunned about. I put my arm in a thinking position unaware that the result was a toasty sensation that I shouldn't have felt. Baffled by what I had just experienced I lifted my hand and noticed that once again my body was glowing the same purple it had before.
   But, before I could even think about what to do with my life, the darkness that I could only see before 
( besides my glowing ) was expelled by the brightness that soon replaced my sight. "Who are you and whats your power?" the man said. He had oddly brown hair with green highlights and eyes as gray as the darkest clouds. He was wearing a blue Hawaiian shirt, tan shorts, and he wore a weird purple burglars mask. "Wh-What?" I asked confused " are you talking about? I'm only twelve and don't you know my name already?" " I guess so, but tell me your power or else!" he yelled. "Or what Barneys going to haunt me in a hula skirt with a foam Nerf gun!" I yelled. But before getting him even more mad I quickly added," And I don't even know what power your talking about!"
    He picked me up by my ruffly blue top and scanned me from the bottom of my gray converse, then to my skinny jeans, and finished at my eyes. "Are you playing with me girl? Because I know that you remember your own power!" he yelled. "I don't know my own power! I thought those were only in fantasies! "And the only thing I know is that my body is glowing purple! I don't trust you anyway whats your name?" I asked hectic. "My name is Ryan." he said taking his mask off  "now what color did you glow?" "Purple" I responded. Then next few seconds he muttered things struggling to decide what power I contained, "    Purple...love...no...fame...no...yes,yes,YES!!!" "What is it?" I questioned him. " You are the daughter of Imagy, you have the power to imagine..."

Ok heres part 2!!!

   After the shadow left I panicked. What was happening? What was wrong with my body glowing all purple? I ran upstairs paying attention to every nook and cranny of my house. But I missed something. Something very important. Someone or something was staring at me from the window sill...
   I packed a duffel bag with everything I needed for my survival including a sleeping bag. I wasn't coming back to this place I used to call home. Why am I even saying this? This wasn't even my home! I grabbed a water bottle, a sandwich, and some snacks as food and ran out and into the streets of New York. It was December 10 and the weather was regularly blistering cold.
   But, something was irregular. The streets should be flooded with people drunk with the merry feeling of Christmas. But still no one to be found. All of a sudden I heard a rapid pace of quick footsteps. I turned my head now snow covered on my brown hair and found a middle aged lady. My hair was covering my sea green eyes but I could make out a sad expression of sympathy.
   Then the expression changed to terrified as she pointed a skinny and bony finger behind me. Confused I looked behind me and immediately got the same expression the lady did. Then darkness...and the only sense I had left that I could barely use was my hearing. "...Yes...Irene Imagy....of course its her..." was all I could hear  "...what power?...I think its love or vampire right?...oh yeah the last name thing ... they also have a certain color?...right."
   I was confused and horrified I just turned 12 today! Then I thought really hard about what they talked about and I couldn't relate anything to what ever happened to me. Then I realized something. How could I forget? How could I miss that my body glowed purple.....

My story part 1

    Funny I thought. I lifted my hand it was glowing a light purple. "AAAK!" I yelped. I got up from my bed and looked at myself in the reflecting mirror. My whole body glowed but it the glowing dimmed at a rapid pace. I was wondering curiously what had just happened and relayed the events all over again. My world was turning upside down. What was happening.
   My heart was beating at a rapid pace as I slowly made my way from my room to the kitchen. I looked around me, the walls were blue instead of white. The paintings were switched around and some of the paintings I have never seen before. The shiny, ash black piano was the same but it was on the other side of the room. When I got in the living room I looked left and saw the oddly colored green and purple laundry room and bathroom. I Looked to my right and found the kitchen remarkably the same. I ran to the only place familiar to me and got some snacks and orange juice out of the refrigerator. The orange juice felt so good finding its way down my throat and nourishing it along the way. I felt as if I had just taken a long journey and hadn't eaten in a while.
   There was one more thing I needed to check in order to feel very comfortable. I already knew that my parents weren't there cause I checked on my way down but I needed to know how the outside looked. Everything looked different to me and I just needed to be reassured that this ere I and that I wasn't crazy. Before opening the window to the backyard I made sure I wasn't dreaming by pinching myself as if my life depended on it. I wasn't asleep. I took a long, shaky, breath as I closed my eyes and opened the window.
   When I opened my eye I looked around. Everything seemed normal, then I looked at the floor and found a shadow of a black mouse, but no body. I wasn't Roman but I knew what it meant. I took an extremely deep breath as I realized that this wasn't the world I was born into, this wasn't the house I was raised in, and most importantly this wasn't where I should be standing....


    



Let me know what you think if you really like it I'll post part two!